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Re: Clutched||| Chapter One
Hello Evangelinne. First, you need to stay at a 2:1 ratio, meaning you need to post two reviews before you post something of your own. M'kay, now that we have ...
May 14, 2009 -
Re: Dream Walker
Hey Lexcy, I'm Becca or doodle, whichever you prefer. I would suggest not being so pushy. A simple "Please review, I'm desperate." Or something would be all needed. Then, if ...
May 12, 2009 -
Re: Traitor (Chapter 1: Changes)
Hello Diane, nice to see you again! Can't wait to get reading some more of your work! A light breeze picked up as I half ran down the stairs and ...
May 12, 2009 -
Re: Antigone's Critique Shop
Tittle: The Last Gift Genre: Fantasy-ish Summary: A mute girls finds a maagicall journal, to put it one sentance. xD Link: Thanks in advance!
May 11, 2009 -
Re: What would you do...if you had that kind of power...
Hiya Keira! I'm Becca (or doodle)! Have you ever looked at the stars, looked at them and wondered, what, if anything was beyond them? You don't need to repeat 'looked.' ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: What would you do...if you had that kind of power...
Hiya Keira! I'm Becca (or doodle)! Have you ever looked at the stars, looked at them and wondered, what, if anything was beyond them? You don't need to repeat 'looked.' ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: Another Sunset Chapter One
Hiya again! I think everybody else got mostly everything. Well, I love the story and the turn was unexpected. Also, with the whole ambulance thing. I'm a bit confused. Was ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: Caught in Flames
Hiya diaNe! Wow this is pretty lengthy. Anywho, let's get started! =D What eighteen year old doesn’t know how to say ‘Present’? eighteen-year-old and you don't need to capitalize 'present'. ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: Another Sunset. Prologue.
Hey Colleen! Let's get started! "Come on Dakota! You can tell me anything, I thought you would know that by now, we've been best friends for like...forever," he smiled , ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: The Last Gift - Chpt 1
This is just an idea. Nothing really happens in this chapter. I know I posted this in fantasy, and the fantasy part starts kicking in probably about the second or ...
May 10, 2009 -
Re: The Other Side Of The Light
Hello, L0zZ@! I've been told that you must do two reviews before every post. So I would do your two reviews soon... Ask anybody with a colored name if you ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Hola!
I think all parents say everything their child does is good. Well, at least mine do. Thanks, Music! I'll be sure to check those out!
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: Hola!
Thanks! Uh... I play the flute? I'm not sure if you would call that a talent, though, because I'm not all that good at it. Vivi, to answer your questions ...
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: Shadows [1]
Hiya! this is my first review so I'll do my best! That was definitly ... weird and intense as Dudette said. Hands shake uncontrollably, cover my contorted face. Hands shaking ...
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: Hola!
Hi!! My name is Rebecca but I prefer Becca or Doodle is fine too. :] I love smilie faces. :D I live in the U.S. in the middle of nowhere. ...
Apr 27, 2009
